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Poetry

Colour Poems

Blue
Blue is feathery, shy Pukekos.
Blue is shiny, deep, cold water.
Blue is a high, clear sky.
Blue is small, cute blue birds.
By Fergus

Blue
Blue is a silky, playful dolphin swimming through the water.
Blue is a sweet, juicy blueberry.
Blue is the cold, sparkly, deep sea coming into the shore.
By Emily

Red
Red is blood rushing.
Red is a burning flame.
Red is hot bubbly lava.
Red is a soft rose petal.
By James

Green
Green is slippery, crunchy grass.
Green is healthy lettuce.
Green is slimy lime.
Green is soft, puffy moss.
By Paige

White
White is shimmering snow.
White is fluffy, bubbly clouds in the sky.
White is a thin and flat tissue that rubs against my skin.
White is creamy, yummy vanilla ice cream melting from my skin.
By Naomi

Black
Black is a dark night sky.
Black is yummy olives.
Black is black, dark coal.
Black is thick oil.
By Matt

White 
White is chilly snow falling to the ground.
White is fluffy soft clouds in the sky.
White is silky flat tissues, holding waste.
White is silky, swift horses.
By Emma

Blue
Blue is a rare, friendly whale.
Blue is a soaring, bright McCaw.
Blue is wet, falling raindrops.
Blue is little, flightless penguins.
By Gus


Can you write a colour poem?  Have a go and paste it back to us Mums & Dads, we would love to see how creative you can be!!  

Barrhill Class











American Bullfrogs.

American bullfrogs are Amphibians.

Bullfrogs are green or brown with darker blotches and a light coloured underside.
Frogs have moist skin.  

They can be over 20 centimeters long and over 1.4 kilograms in weight.  

Frogs can be noisy and make noises like a cow mooing.

Bullfrogs live in freshwater.  Frogs eat insects, mice, fish and snakes.  

They take two to four years to become fully grown bullfrogs.  Bullfrogs like warm weather.

I think bullfrogs are amazing.

By Blake.




American Bullfrogs

American Bullfrogs are amphibians.They are green or brown with dark blotches.

Bullfrogs make a deep and loud jug-o-rum call it sounds like a cow mooing.

Frogs like to eat mice, snakes, fish and other small creatures.

Bullfrogs live in freshwater ponds, lakes, and marshes.

They like warm weather.

I like bullfrogs because they make a mooing sound.

By Ruby



Fruit Descriptions


My fruit is a crescent shape and it has yellow skin with black marks.
When I bite it, it is sweet, cold and sloppy.
When I am eating it I hear squish, squashes and it is bumpy, soft and smooth.
It smells fresh, milky, creamy and sweet.
It is a banana.
By Juliet





My fruit is fresh and yummy and it is a yellow crescent.
It has brown lumps at the end, on the top it is green, inside is white with little rings.
When I slide my hand across it, it feels smooth and is squishy.
I bite into my fruit and it makes a squishy, slurpy sound.
My fruit tastes sweet and soft.
My fruit is a banana.
By Gus


My fruit is in a pot.
When I eat it I hear squishy, squelchy and mushy noises and it tastes sugary, sweet and fresh.
I see a purple, white triangle shape.
It is soft and it smells sweet and sour.
My fruit is a pear.
By Emma


My fruit is a green fruit with a brown stalk on the bottom.
I can see the white veins inside it.
My fruit is mushy and a little crunchy.
It is a cylinder shape.
It is a yummy fruit, my fruit is a grape.
By Sam


My fruit is bright red and green.
When I bite into it, it makes a crunch.
It tastes sweet and juicy.
My fruit feels hard and fat.
It smells sweet and sour.
My fruit is an apple.
By Charlie


My fruit is a green circle shape.
It is bumpy on the outside.
In the middle it has pips.
When I eat my fruit it is sour and sweet, that taste was crunchy and squishy.
It is slimy and bumpy when I touch it.
It smells sour and sweet.
It is a cucumber.
By Leo


My fruit smells sweet and fresh.
It has a bright green oval shaped body.
It feels wet and smooth when I rub my hand over it.
When I bite into my fruit it makes a squishy noise.
It tastes sweet and juicy.
My fruit is grapes.
By Emily







11 comments:

  1. Miss Ish I loved to read the fruit deseriptions love from Juliet

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  2. To Miss Ish I love the Fruit deseriptions from naomi

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  3. Some cool descriptive writting little growing ones....I enjoyed reading each and every single one they were all very awesome :)

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  4. I like that you put bull frogs on it love from Juliet

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  5. love it ruby your bull frog pichture love naomi

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  6. What great descriptive stories everyone has given... I can almost taste the fruit and hear the bull frogs.

    Ruby's Auntie in Australia

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  7. will i like your blog it's funny becase matt dose not go on it and that his big sister dose we found that he wasint becase he don't want to do homeworkthank you
    from mini

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    1. good it's because he doesn't like doing his homework.

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  8. cool i like grapes
    love naomi

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