Descriptive Writing

At the moment we are looking at adding more description to our writing.  We have done lots of descriptive writing about different objects/pictures, trying to make our writing more exciting.

This week we have been designing our own monsters and writing a description of it for others to draw.  We had fun trying to draw other monsters from what we read!  Below are some examples of our descriptions.

Barrhill Room

I have a hungry monster named Armstrong.
My hungry monster has an oval yellow body but no head.  Armstrong has two eyes, one black eye and one white eye on his body.
He has three vicious tentacles on each side of his body.
My hungry monster has four blue legs with clawed feet.

By Regan


I have a cloud monster named Spotty.
It has a cloud shape body with spots on it.  It is blue.
It has long arms and legs.  The legs are golden with red feet.  Her arms are blue and purple with green hands.  It has one yellow eye with brown eyelashes.
She has a light blue triangle shaped nose and a dark blue semi circle mouth with sharp teeth.  She is really funny and silly.

By Ruby


I have a cheeky monster named Penny.
Penny my monster has a fat, heart shaped, pink body.  She has three purple eyes on    her head and one has a eye patch on it.  She has two long skinny blue arms with one finger on the end of each.  Penny has long, long legs and little feet with tiny toes.

By Jessica